All Comments on 'Actuary vs Redhead'

You write very well. I enjoyed your story very much. The spelling and grammar is impeccable (no distractions) and there is a fantastic probability to the entire idea. Nice work.

Having read many of your stories, I would rank this as the best one ever! Why?

It is nice and compact--in a word succinct.

The entire situation is completely plausible.

Both characters seem to learn a lesson about themselves, sadly, she more than he.

There is some light, in the form of hope, at the end of the tunnel, for the lovers.

Aloha,

Glenn from Hawaii

Sweet.

I've read very little in this area but am beginning to feel that I might have been missing out. Your story is well told with delicious irony. At the end you reached a Taming of the Shrew moment that portended well for the future, at least from the man's perspective. And methinks the young woman likely won't be displeased, either.

Veni Vidi Vici

I hated 2nd paragraph of this story so much I quit. I’m in disbelief of the rating given for this.