All Comments on 'Adam and Steve Ch. 04'

Sigh! I will try again. When normal people talk to each other they tend to shorten words such as...

I'm sorry instead of I am sorry.

I didn't instead of I did not

Don't instead of Do not.

Are you getting what I mean? So please stop all the I am sorry constantly and just make it I'm sorry.

Apart from that I loved this chapter and hope the next will be posted soon.

I'm so glad to see this. I've been wondering what happened. Can't wait for more chapters! I love the stories you tell.

And your contractions are just fine. I see plenty of can't and won't and didn't. Maybe the one "I am" could have been "I'm", but I think we're doing okay.

Yes I have my favorite author back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Welcome back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This chapter rocksssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!! So glad Jeff and Teddy came out to Adam and Steve. Also am glad to see Adam tell Steve how he feels about Steve spending money on him like crazy. There is soooooooooo many ways to take this story. Kmiller I just want to say to you that some people care about the I am sorrys but others don't. So keep writing like you have and don't worry about the rest.

Will be fidgety waiting for the rest of your great writings.

ACLASSYLADY

that you are back! Especially looking forward to an update and the Fireman/Librarian story. That is my favorite! Please post more soon, thank you!

Welcome back. I hope you plan to finish off the stories you left uncompleted, like this one, The Fireman and the Librarian and even Dave and Leroy, which I think needs some closure. Thank you for your stories.

Great chapter for a great story. Thanks for continuing to write and post for us to read. I can look past any mistakes to enjoy the feeling of the characters and the plot of the story, it doesn't have to be perfect to be wonderful and appreciated. Keep them coming.

Welcome back and loved this chapter. Had to laugh at the last sentence because now we don't know if Adam walked out in frustration or with a sigh. I hope the latter as these two are great. Can't wait for the next chapter

I love your stories. I feel like I know these guys, and sometimes I am these guys. Please give me more.

You always stop when it gets good!? What about the kids? And their relationship! ARGGH!

Waiting with impatience for the continuation of the story. :) I hope it will be soon.

I like your stories. I like the fact you give backstories and all especially the fact they aren't "Fuck them and leave them" type. But really what is it with not finishing a story. I mean seriously? if you not going to finish such a good story it's better to not post it until you can find a suitable ending and not leaving it hanging like that in the middle of a sentence. Any way waiting for the follow up hopefully it would be soon

now I feel bad for not reading the whole comment thread before adding mine. get well soon

Reading this again because the Author has posted a new chapter. This

is where this Author found their voice, I suspect. Five Stars