All Comments on 'Adam and Steve Ch. 05'

I know you probably hear this all the time, but you should really consider getting an editor so that the story flows more smoothly and is easier to read. The storyline is developing but the errors in tenses and grammar makes this much harder ro enjoy

Go write your own story. I'm so sick of the nasty, negative, critical writing police bullshit. It's a free site. The story is really good. Get a life, shut up and don't read it if all you are going to do is be a shitty jerk.

gay man!!

I hate grammer nazis! Do you really think writing is easy? It's more than just leaving an anonymous compliant on someone's talent. Get over yourself. Did you even bother to read the author notes at the beginning of each and every chapter? Life happens. Illness happens. Art does not make itself overnight. And yes, writing is an art.

This platform should be a place to help build up creativity in the form of constructive criticism, not a bullying pulpit for those who choose to hide behind anonymity.

Kmillerk1, keep doing you hon. Post when you are comfortable with your piece. Keep asking for constructive criticism. Learn and grow. Those of us who appreciate your stories will always be with you no matter when your updates happen.

Rant over

there are to many arse holes telling kat that her stories are badly wrote , shut the fuck up you arse holes. . kats stories a fucking good its just a pity people who slag them off will not get her to write more. if you dont like em dont fucking read them ., and keep your fucking comments to your self . me and kat used to be friendly , but due to issues with my life we stopped talking . k miler get writing and do what you do best fucking fantastic stories. from jonathan in the united kingdom.xxxxxx six feet 9 inches tall gay man xxxxx

Your story is awesome,hope to read more!

Is there going to be more of this sequel because I don’t like to be left hanging