All Comments on 'Adam at the Arcade'

I loved this story so much, I can't wait to read your other "episodes" Keep up the great work. I must say, I found the pace in the scenes where Guy is teaching doggie, to be a bit boring. Maybe speed up the pace and shorten these scenes a little?

Thank you for liking it. I think you're right about the part where the guy is teaching Adam. I'll consider reworking it during revision.

Just a heads-up—some of the stuff I write isn't very sweet. (One will be coming up in a few days.) But I try to give explicit warnings at the starts of those sorts of stories, so it's easy to avoid them.