All Comments on 'Adam's Family Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
First Time

I have read one of your stories,I will be reading more[it is possible to access your stories without coming anywhere near Literotica.]???

Spider1Spider1almost 16 years ago
Hella Good

Great story, bro. 4-alarm fire with nice detail, great pacing and build-up. Looking forward to the next chapters - Now I've got to go back and read the first set. Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
all over the place

crossword puzzle in reading this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Got me hot

Can't wait for more!! A day is too long! I don't know what the other person is talking about, because this story is hot AND well written. Probably some religious nut lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Too many tangents

I agree with the "all-over-the place" comment. Did a schizophrenic write this? Too hard to follow, going off on too many tangents. Go back on your meds and try again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
wish she was my aunt

i'd love to have an aunt like christine. ignore the trolls they don't know what they're talking about. hot aunt and nephew find long lost cousin and hot cybersex follows. probably some jealous person who can't write making nasty comments out of spite. can't wait for them all to fuck for reals.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Why do I all of a sudden want to play the Addams family song lol anybody else?

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