All Comments on 'Addiction to Mature Woman'

EDITOR!

Krap.

Eve was WOMAN. The rest are women.

Yes, get an editor, please.

I had a story kicked back because they didn't like my comma placement! WTF?

Author, Suggestion..... Get a proof reader for your next effort. Reduce the OMG usage

by at least 80%. Otherwise, nice characters and plot. Thanks. jntiques

Your spelling, grammar and plot development STINKS!!.

It makes it painful to read your crap. You need to use a spell checker at a minimum and an editor as well.

I hope this is your last story submitted to Literotica!

And as a post script, I am sure your penis is 2.5 inches long.

This story reminds me of me. when I was 25 I fucked a 38 year old mother of 3. She was 5 feet 7 with blonde hair a nice big butt and 38F TITS we worked together and the very first day we met she sucked my cock. When we started fucking she was the one who came up with the idea of taking sex pictures and sending it to her ex husband. The only difference was he never called her back just text. Now I am 46 and I will never forget when I fucked my first older woman. Now women see the bulge in my pants and I get laid

I'm blown away by the comments on here lol this is Web site where people share erotic sex stories for free. So I find it funny all those that want perfect spelling and punctuation your reading stories about sex on a free Web site ??? wtf did you expect to find??? lol idiots

please, continue. I haven't laughed this hard in some time :P lol

You have a good story line with the "Addiction to Mature Woman", its every young mans dream. You can bring in incest, Mother and Grandmother. All out of the same story line.

You have had some criticism, listen to it and make up your own mind.

Make the stories as believable as possible.

Keep up the writing.

REgards

Very nice loved both stories so far can’t wait for the third

These are porn stories, not meant to be total art.

Yes spelling is terrible .

Quick and simple is the base writing style here, it plot and descripton are much more important.

That will come.

5 FUCKING STARS!

I thought it was a damn good story! better than a lot of other stories on here. yes, the author needs an editor for miss spells but not for his story line. You go, Younghungguuy! YOU GO! Sorry you wrote only two stories. Wonder why.

3 stars----and I'm being generous.............

So terribly amateur with the slam-bam-thank-you-ma'am approach---not to mention the D cup breasts along with the thick, 9 inches. And to top it all off, your spelling and use of grammar is abysmal! Don't give up your day job!!!

Nice story I want to read more.. 2nd part 3rd, 4th etc

13 inches you say, but he doesn’t use it as rule!! 😉