All Comments on 'Adele, A Coed Story Ch. 01'

Loved all the inner dialogue going thru her head as her body was being used. Also loved the ending where the brother lost all his confidence one the backstory turned out to be a lie. Well done!

Seriously.

I absolutely love everything about your story. Your imagination is nasty yet you have your morals. You're still nasty though, but I love it! I look forward to reading more from you☄

I appreciate the caracter development, the way you navigated the flow, etc, Several wrong/missing words (I figure typing while you allowed your brain to run ahead & play.

It didn't really ruin anything, but it always cheapens the story.

Haters gonna hate. Just ignore.

Great story.

the comment was removed and my last comment no longer makes sense. Yeah, haters going to hate, I get that. I don't mind criticism, but not just a stream of insults from a troll. There is no call for that.Thanks to all my readers, and thanks to all who post original content to share with others. I haven't really had a troll comment on here before, I thought this community was more mature, and I think for the most part it is. Anyway, hope you enjoy and continue to give feedback. Thanks again.

You will notice that the worst criticism comes from those who do not post stories. Write and disregard the trolls

Rape not a turn on