All Comments on 'Adrenaline Rush Ch. 02'

Great effort on the second instalment, love the amount of detail and pseudoscientific explanations. Hope you get the next chapter out sooner ;)

you took too long. I forgot all about this story in that time. Thanks for another chapter

Please don't make us wait to long for the next chapter! Thanks!

Ruining lives, destroying people and all so he can fuck some pussy.

That describes 99.9999999999% of stories in here. And all of them are equally boring.

When's Chapter 3 coming?

Not gonna lie, I found this story by accident when looking for another one (which I still haven't found...). I was pleasantly surprised by the writing quality. And the fact that it's fucking hot.

after two years. It's rare to see a new wrinkle on a mind control story, but you pulled it off and you've certainly left enough interesting hints for continuation of this plot for me to check back for Chapter 3.

I do o want to respond to some criticism. While readers are, of course, free to read (and not read) what they want and free to like (and dislike) what they want, if the author is trying to write a character who is a dislikable sociopath then if readers complain that they hate the boss because he's a dislikable sociopath, the author should take pride, he (or she) had achieved her (or his) goal. In fact, the more virulent the complaints about the boss the better.

Chapter 3 Please!

Extraordinary, it's never too late for a third part ;-)