by gaggedKitty23
How Did Miranda and Jason "drift apart" and then try to have a kid while he was overseas all the time?(which is why the affair started in the first place)
then
How was Mathew subdued without any fight at all? He"s a trained body guard who probably has a special forces background?,add to the fact that he was protecting the woman he loves. Maybe you should have picked someone more benign like the gardner,poolboy,chauffeur or a gigalo she was seeing regularly,to be the soon to be doomed lover
You'd think Jas on would have bought the best protection for his wife.
Can"t wait see how this pans out
The claim of the body guard would be difficult to capture is naive and not an honest criticism of the plot.
People disappear everyday and there is no body guard and no training that could not be overcome given the parameters of a lot of money and up to 5 pros. Even one guy with a police spring fired Taser could capture him. That particular challenge taken care of. The story is well written and the sex scenes OK.
Give the author respect and profesional opinion.
id give it a lot of stars