by maverick2010
Unless you write what other Indian cuckold writer hadn't: it has been a drag like the others.
Try using a space or two after each sentence. I couldn't read the story.
Not erotic and certainly not original.
Enough already. Listen to the commenters. Your story sucks man!!!
I can only regard that as a threat.
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Adulterous Sneha, sounds like a venereal disease for cheaters.