All Comments on 'Adultery with the Sister-in-Law'

by Chimney Sweep

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janesays100janesays100about 1 year ago

As always your mastery of the language nailed it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A good story but it makes me uncomfortable. I have never cheated and it makes me wonder so many do and I never have. Never really been tempted.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Exciting, going to have to try this with my sister-in-law.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
What a buildup!

The descriptions & thoughts racing through his head were wonderful. You're a hell of a writer. Keep up the good work.!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Superior writer at work here.

This is a sophisticated short story, well told. I suspect the writer is a pro, slumming amongst us wankers.

AwakeningofSensesAwakeningofSensesover 9 years ago
Well put.

I think you are right on the money in that situation. In for a penny, in for a pound. The damage is done all is left is to ride it till the wheels fall off.

hodunkhodunkover 12 years ago
Great Read!

Really liked it. Keep'em comin.

HarddaysknightHarddaysknightalmost 17 years ago
Well done!

I enjoyed the story. The writer made the emotions and the reasoning seem real.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
A+

An angry fuck can be the best fuck you've ever had. I'm waiting for the fallout: will her sister join or not?

Mwah-hah-hah.

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What, this guy is still alive? Sorry, yes, still kicking. I've got so much work in process I don't know what to work on. Help me out! Y'all get a notification when I update this thing, so tell me what you want! You just might get it. Maybe. No promises. And no weird ...