by syrensong
Make that very, very good work! This raises the quality average on lit. Please write more...
Okay, I'm impressed. Enjoyed the development of the story line and felt that you did a credible job of building to a climax (yeah, I know, but no pun intended)
I have read a lot of erotica but this is the best written story I have ever read of a father and daughter. The mental trouble of the father in accepting his daughter and the seduction of the father by the daughter was masterful. Please keep up the wonderful work.
What a story! Was without a doubt finely written and worth every mesmerising second of its reading! What a warm feeling it left!
Bravo! & Thanks!
Sexmate!
I'm sure it wasn't 'absolutely perfect' - but I'm not going to try to find any fault. It was a wonderful read - thanks to J for sending me the link - and I shall read it again. Do write some more!!
Lukas
Good enough I'll read it again! I'll also watch for more stories!
I love the way you built this story. It is difficult to stop reading what you have written, the step by step journey from Father Daughter to lovers. Just great! Thanks for writing this story.
Well done! Written in a way that conveyed the love between two people that moved well beyond father/daughter into something deeper and which included playfulness and great sexual energy. Well done.
Incest or no, love between human beings is never a bad thing. I just wish there was more of it, instead of so much sadness and anger. Very nice, sexy story. Please give us more of these loving sweet characters.
Great love story & would like to see more stories about them as their continuing love & relationship develops.
Here's hoping that the sequel will be equally grand. Oh, and if the daughter is so insistant that she get pregnant in the first month, maybe she shouldn't be on the pill (just kidding, I got the meaning but I thought that the pregnancy reference might lead to something later).
Somehow, I was sure the dad would wind up in a three-way with his daughter and her friend though. Oh well, an idea for the sequel I guess.
Routine story, but the sequence of sexual events was rather matter of fact and not very dramatic. Initially you claimed that Chris was a 10 year old, yet your narrative treats him as if he were a baby. I would like to see an additional chapter to get Maria sexually involved . . . .