All Comments on 'Adventure of Rekka Ch. 01'

good

While this is only the first chapter, I've already got a good impression of your writing. I like how you've conveyed Bill's and Rekka's personalities in a small amount of text.

Have to admit I'm intrigued, interesting start has got me curious to see what's next.

God damn that was a good beginning to a story. After looking for a good story for what felt like forever, it looks like I hit the jackpot. My only complaint is that it's not longer. Absolutely can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm cautiously hopeful! Need any reference material pics for later girls?

I’m interested enough to want to see more of the story nicely written

You have a nice start to your story. Now lets see if you can make the chapter's longer and keep them good and interesting.

Oh My GOD, that this funniest most twisted thing I've read in a while. The thing I like best and find most disturbing is how similar Bill and I think. Not to mention the I can easily making some of the same jokes he did. And speaking of jokes there's a big one in what you did with the langues; Elvish/French (which explains soooooo much about the French), Goblin/Spanish (which I will not get into), and of course Hund/German (I would have so face-palmed right then). To quote Bill, "hell I'm down," I have no idea where this going but I'm definitely going to enjoy the ride.

Fun writing style, Monster girl setting, Definitely worth the time to read. Thanks for this.

>goblins speak spanish

>elves speak french

Top kek

Seems like an awesome start to as storyline. Great balance of humor, can't wait for more.

In favor of saving you time (and disappointment) the last chapter NOT the stories end was submitted nearly three months ago with no word of the next update. I don't know if there is a set amount of time before declaring a story dead but if it means anything beforehand it was being updated every other week or so until now. I promise to delete this if and when it is updated or hear from the author.

It really is a great story and I honestly hope nothing terrible has happened to the author but stories like this drive me INSANE!

Promising story, but it is most likely dead and will remain unfinished.

There has been a new chapter since the pessimists were last here.

dont have anything bad to say, only wouldve added a tag 'otherworld' cuz come on. not in kansis no longer, or earth for that matter. i like the humor of bill. also where i can infringe how the story developes. plus a pleasant suprise when discovering a new series, a brand new chapter publisted today. i will most likely bing-read it all, and will now be following you. patiently waiting for ch.10.

nice so far

Interesting...

Love teh line:

"All right, let's get this over with. I should warn you I'm chock full of carcinogens and gristle."