by mosesD
I'm really liking the story so far. Last chapter was pretty hot and the plots getting good keep it up! If you're a fan of monster girls you might want to check out and maybe join touchfluffytail.org. They got a ton of solid authors and stories over there.
For your first story this is pretty good. Unlike many sci-fi stories that bore me to death with information dumps you instead have hooked me and made me chuckle more than once with your impressive writing. I was both surprised and not surprised to see the word "Boomstick" at the end of this chapter considering I have been getting that vibe from not just this story but also the humor. That's a BIG two thumbs up from me!
I feel I must also point out that I also enjoy the romance and world building and you're actually writing a story and not a self-love aid like so many other "stories" on this site, so stick to your guns cause this story is clearly better for it. Don't get me wrong, chapter two's action was HOT! but I'm honestly much more interested in this upcoming chat between Bill and Rekka and the development of their albeit unconventional but still very organic relationship.
I appreciate all the comments and support. Never thought I'd try my hand at writing a story, but this one has been percolating in my head for a while now. Just felt like I had to get it out. I'm really enjoying it! Hopefully I can keep it interesting. Chapter 4 has been submitted. Should be up soon, if everything is in order. Thanks again, everyone!
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Your stories are very good and intriguing, I say keep up the good work ol chap.
Im also seeing some refrences to army of darkness in here which is quite applaudable.
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Funny A.F.!
Def Evil Dead 3 vibes..."Yeah, I know how guns work, you primitive screwhead,"/Boomstick Mk. II S/N 0003, it read in clear unmistakable English.