All Comments on 'Adventures in Amsterdam'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Nice Idea

I enjoyed your story. It was an imaginative idea, and well writen.

Congratulations.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
A dirty mind is a joy forever.

Original, sparkling, eloquent, enticing, a serenade to the the (naughty) mind.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
The New Ulysses

Wow! Sheer genius. I thought that nobody would ever be able to write with such raw honesty about the experience of having an electrical chip in their panties. I salute you.

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