All Comments on 'Adventures in Paradise Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
See my first comment on 2nd Hedo story first

Oh hell friend, I just now read this first Hedo story.. While it still seems dated, I KNOW Jeff and Loretta!! I have their card in front of me I type! Jeff, receding hairline and beard, Loretta, long dark hair, tall with small/medium breasts... She's a talker.. They love liquor covered chocolate deserts.... Oh hells!! Too funny.. What a small world.. Mayhaps we will meet.. Octobers are great in Hedo....

goducks111goducks111almost 5 years ago
even though its a very short story

it took a while to read it. pretty mechanical.

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