All Comments on 'Adventures in the Rim: Athene'

by Peekabo3o

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
woohoo

So excited to see a skyrim theme! There's so much you can do with it!! I always thought Vilkas was hot, and you captured him perfectly! Maybe you can do something with the vampires? There's so many ways you can take this. I'm excited!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Really bad

Beginning, middle, end. A story is a path. This is like a maze; or worse, like a small child making up a story... "We were on this road, and oh yeah, there was a cow, and we were headed to grandma's house, which is by a big tree..."

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