All Comments on 'Adventures of Cockweasel Ch. 05'

I love the series. Your sci-fi and fantasy stories are excellent. I hope you do more of both, and soon.

This was truly an excellent read!

What a great story. I'm into RPG's and D&D, w/c was why i initially didn't think I would like a story about a goblin's adventures. But I was wrong. Great job!!! And what they said was right, you're Sci-Fi and Fantasy stories are awesome!! hope you keep doing more!

mate,

absolutely loved it, well done and keep writing more about cockweazel

Excellent writing technique, fine detail and a believable storyline, should be rated among the best stories in Literotica.

Bravo!

Loved it! Lots of fun to read. Going to tell my friends about it. One of the best reads ive had in ages. Keep it up. Loved your main character.

Very good writing! It was believable, accurate, and also funny, keep up the good work, I would buy your book if you wrote one.

PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!

Fun, entertaining & erotic!

Y'know, I'm making an adult game about goblins, and this has really been an inspiration- My only complaint is that he only got to 'do' one girl; Should have raped the sorceress, first. She had it coming. Please keep writing- Hope the little goblin gets lucky with the paladin soon! For a sample of the game, contact me at burnout02urza@yahoo.com

I really thought this was an excellent story. It's one of my favotite re-reads. I'd like to see more Gwyneth. And some Valeria the Black too. Your story rocked!

I think that this story was more believable than your Agent Hooters and Agent Slut stories on Literotica. I absolutely loved this!!!

Cockweasel is easily one of my favorite characters ever, and possibly the only horny, anti-ish-heroic goblin I know of. How you managed to simultaneously make the story incredibly hot and yet make well fleshed out characters is truly astounding. The again, its hardly a mystery, after all this was written by the most awe inspiring writer on the site, and perhaps in the entire world of erotic literature. I salute you.

OK, we need more of Cockweasel's adventures.

I have read ur whole series and left something to be desired although great over all no doubt there was not alot of sex for a 5 story series rate 4 stars

great story-telling and humor

I really enjoyed reading about Cockweasel, I hope he returns one day.

hey, this was very good! I want more!

I didn't like that Valeria died just like that at the hands of the demon without the nasty little Goblin having his way with her at least once more. I think this antagonistic character was wasted unfortunately.

Part of the erotic comes from the fact, that the arrogant evil sorceress bossed Cockweasel around all the time. Hence Cockweasel managing to turn the tables and dominating her would have been very much erotic. I guess most readers hoped, that at some point Valeria will be put in a submissive position unwillingly. Unfortunately it never happened and the character simply died. A big wasted opportunity in my eyes...