All Comments on 'Adventures of Harry and Laney Ch. 01'

Of course, it was predictable what would happen, given the setup, but it was still a fun little story. And of course, the two main characters have to be a little air-headed for this story to work. Every once in a while, you have to just suspend all disbelief and go along for the ride. I thank you for the ride.

but we all know this is going to lead to she didn't fuck her hubby, there were 2 spiders there

Thanks, I really enjoyed this story. It was just what it claimed to be--light hearted fiction. Full marks from this corner.

and escapades just don't belong in the same story... the price for using them together eventually become too high a cost.

"Than" is used to compare things; "then" is used to indicate time. The first five usages of 'then' is incorrect; you need to use the word ''than". I do like the set up, however.

Harry or Laney. If Harry thinks he was unconscious, then he wasn't having sex with anybody. Laney knows she's a cheating slut. A couple of complete fools. Nothing fun about that.

If the dreamer and SJ think it's funny or cute, everyone else will think it sucks. Only six more days to St. Paddy's day, and finally those assholes will go away.

I agree with swingerjoe. I enjoyed it.

I suspect the whole sweet, clueless thing will pretty soon become irritating, though, so you might want to think about them becoming a bit more aware without entirely losing their innocence.

She seems to appear and disappear sort of randomly.

1, blackout doesn't always mean unconscious, it can be unable to remember. 2 Mary Jane Watson is Spider-Mans wife, and the costume that Laney was wearing

We all know if Carolina and SJ like this, then it will turn into cuck garbage.

I like the mistaken identity stories and it was very well told especially with the costume choices.

Very good comment! It was right on the the money--if you can't calculate that the 3.29 score this presently carries, actually equals about a 66% score. Considering the mess 'Anonymous Commandos' have made of the LW scoring that actually isn't bad.

I still stick by my original comment.

He spends hours each day posting these from either one of his many alias accounts (justgr8, just8reading, Impo-64, miss-horny, gordo12, gman57, bayernpeter1, etc) or as anonymous where he tries to make it look like hoards of people hate thiese stories. He doesn't quite understand that it's people who like the stories about extramarital sex that seek them out. He's the only one who hates them. It takes a sick and twisted mind to spend hours upon hours on here posting his hatred. Thankfully the vast majority of people who read these stories are normal and get off on them. Let's all just hope this troll gets the psychiatric help he so needs.

Exactly as advertised in the preface - Simple but I liked it anyway.

Gotta do a bbq theme party next. Have her encounter the mystery spidey in the tool shed.

A coworkers cousin that lived down south called him to tell him how he scored at a Halloween party. This married lady knew exactly what she was doing and he benifited. He fucked her ass in the yard while her hubby was getting bombed inside. He’s only 23 and she said she was 56. 7446

Two weeks later Laney found out she was pregnant. Nine months later she had a boy. As soon as Harry say the baby he realized that it was not his as the baby was blond hair and Nordic features whereas birth he and laney had dark brown hair and were of Italian ancestry. Eight months after the baby was born Laney and Harry were officially divorced.

That said, nice story but the flaw was did she not notice his dick wasn’t Harry’s? Maybe she did and didn’t say anything?

A timriv comment that I agree with completely.

This was a great story.

Divorce please... What a slut

1/5 this is cuck shit

Time to kick her to the curb.

love it, hope you make a part 2