All Comments on 'Adventures of Hollywood Jim Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Not too shabby

I'm a fan of Ms. Lively and am glad to see her in a story.

That said, given her age and the pictures I've seen of her in a bikini, her pussy is almost certainly waxed bald, or very tightly waxed. Also, given her eyebrow color, I doubt she's blonde downstairs.

Aside from that minor preference, I liked it.

hollywoodjimhollywoodjimover 14 years agoAuthor
you're right

This was the first story I wrote with her and I think the later stories are a little clearer on the view downstairs, maybe after her first encounter she wanted to "improve the view", thanks for your comments!

gotranegotraneover 11 years ago
Beautifully Written!

Great writing! As HOT as Blake Lively is, this story could have been to the point of repulsive in description, but it so much more the other way. I would almost call it, Classic, but that would be pushing it, a bit, to say the least. Either way, continue writing, and I'll continue reading. Maybe Blake and one of the "Gossip Girl"s could have a round of it, in future installments!?'

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