All Comments on 'Adventures of Hollywood Jim Ch. 46'

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tnadnudertnadnuderalmost 9 years ago
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After watching her on "Conan", was looking for Ashley stories, & have long been a fan of your work, so it added-up, except for an increasing # of mistakes, including:

1] No apostrophe when "Coronas" means more than 1.

2] "...weather or not..."? Are you forecasting?!

3] All these Hollywood stories, you should know how RR spells her first name.

Mojo648Mojo648over 5 years ago
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Towards the end there's a mix up while fucking ash and van, (in ash's bedroom) suddenly Blake was mentioned, was she suddenly there from where? And also after finishing fucking ash and van, it looked like he woke up and there was Blake watching him cook breakfast in his kitchen? What went wrong?

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