All Comments on 'Adventures of Hollywood Jim Ch. 71'

I don't know how else to say it. I always enjoy seeing a new chapter from you but maybe you weren't feeling this one. It just felt a bit rushed, a bit quick, I guess one dud out of 71 isn't exactly bad in the grand scheme but you're better then this.

She's only 16.

Another add to the Hollywood collection makes a great day long read have you considered making an ebook of them