All Comments on 'Adventures of Hollywood Jim Ch. 82'

When she gets drunk she does get nasty and her husband is cool with it

I was OK with most of it, except for a few periods that should be commas & things like that.

Right before the verbal went physical, there's a very-important verb missing in the dialogue.

Lastly, I've read & enjoyed many of your "HJ" stories, but wish you might have separated them differently, so "Adventures" with some celebs could continue/repeat without other celebs being featured in between.

Not a mention about a cheak up at the doctors? How many woman? Suprised it's not dropped off by now, lol

If I were you, I'd remove them ALL, & proofread or have a program do it! Countless mistakes!!!