by hollywoodjim
...and I am caught! How long will I have to wait to be reeled in?
The kind of sophisticated character your protagonist is supposed to project would never, ever, use the word 'elegant' to describe Ikea furniture.
If it weren't for:
Every girl calling his dick beautiful.
I like you. I like you too.
You're a good kisser.
The underlying story is great, but re-using the same sex scene every other chapter could use the same effort put into the narrative. After the first 10 chapters any time there's sex, just scroll past it because you've read it 10 times already.
IF u continue this series , idea hollywood w/ Katy perry but swift finds out & a New war begins 😸. Or a he gets a celeb pregnant? Wanaka Forever.