All Comments on 'Adventures of Hollywood Jim Ch. 92'

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arrowglassarrowglassover 6 years ago
Setting the hook......

...and I am caught! How long will I have to wait to be reeled in?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
You lost me

The kind of sophisticated character your protagonist is supposed to project would never, ever, use the word 'elegant' to describe Ikea furniture.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
This could be an amazing story

If it weren't for:

Every girl calling his dick beautiful.

I like you. I like you too.

You're a good kisser.

The underlying story is great, but re-using the same sex scene every other chapter could use the same effort put into the narrative. After the first 10 chapters any time there's sex, just scroll past it because you've read it 10 times already.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
DAMNN!!!!

IF u continue this series , idea hollywood w/ Katy perry but swift finds out & a New war begins 😸. Or a he gets a celeb pregnant? Wanaka Forever.

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