All Comments on 'Adventures of Teachergirl Ch. 01'

Wow, GREAT START Jenny. I can't wait for part 2. I'd love to read about Rita continuing on with her seduction of Jenny. I found that the most exciting part of the story. Please submit aprt 2 .

Kim

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I really enjoyed your story! I don't know if you are interested in writing a 2nd chapter but you would certainly have 1 avid reader looking forward to it! Good work and great story!!!!

What should she do? Reluctance is one thing, rape is another. She's in the sticks. Buy a shotgun and splatter Eve all over the countryside. Heck, if she's really in the country, just take the body to a pig farm...pigs'll eat anything.

Has just the right amount of build up of tension to the inevitable submission and ????

Like the characters and the story and hope you'll post the next chapter (s) soon.