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Click hereJack stood over her, gasping for breath as she was. Amy laughed, savouring the sensation of slipping her fingers out of her drenched pussy. "I can't believe we did that," she said, eliciting only a grunt of comprehension from Jack. She licked her fingers clean, then to his amazement, slid some of the come from her cheek into her waiting mouth.
"I don't know about you, but I think we should do that again some time," she said with a delicious grin.
Jack could only nod.
Amy slid past him to stand up, feeling her plump, come-covered breasts, and sliding the sticky coating around her chest. "First, I need another shower, then, you can go open up my room," she announced, stepping towards his bathroom.
"Um, Amy?" Jack said.
"Yeah?" she replied, sticking her head back around the bathroom doorframe.
"...Can I watch?" he asked.
She smiled. "I guess it's little late to say no," she answered, disappearing around the doorframe again.
"And... Amy?" he said.
"Yeah?" she called back from the shower cubicle.
"The truth is... er... I don't know how to pick a lock," he admitted at length.
There was a long silence before Amy said anything.
"So are you coming in or what?"
That was really good! Both Amy and Jack seemed like real people with natural reactions and choices in the situation! I like how they didn't have stock appearances, though I would've preferred a bit more description of Amy's breast size. From the way you described them, they were "full" and seemed big enough to have a visible curve in a hoodie, full cleavage, and give sideboob, but they weren't ever really described as large.
I like that they didn't have sex, TBH! Not every erotica has to involve intercourse. Sensuality can involve many things because fucking, after all. It was really cute how awkward Jack was and how Amy slowly was getting into it and egged on by her own arousal later on. It was a very natural progressed how she went form towel, to teasing him because of his reactions, to dressed, to naked and masturbating with him.
This has real potential for more chapters, and the "Ch. 01" has me hopeful! It's good stuff, and I look forward to more of your works!
This story was really hot. Her modesty towards the beginning and the leadup to the exposure was really well done. I'm definitely looking forward to more chapters! Keep up the great work.
Sexy situation, and written with some nice erotic detail. I would have preferred if she stayed a little more teasing and detached (no masturbating in front of him, etc.), but that's just personal taste.