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by CFBwriter

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WindySwimmingWindySwimmingover 8 years ago
Oops! Vote Went Wrong

Thank you for mentioning me, CB. Your story stands out well unmodified as I said to you earlier. Inadvertently gave you 3*'s. You deserve 5. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sue forgot to ask

If any of his friends wanted to fuck her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
You reworked an old trope

Quite successfully...Thanks!

Quibbles ( little ones)...

"Taut" not taught..

And "Smirk' has demeaning, even derogatory connotations you don't intend.

At least you didn't use "thrusted" or "Grinded".

All common on this site.

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