All Comments on 'Aelia in the Kingdom of Farran Ch. 03'

I like the building tension. I like that you haven't painted Aelia with one color, but are allowing shades and shadow.

Im so glad that you wrote chapter 3. I have been wondering if you were going to be posting any time soon. And now that you did... YAY!!! lol. I really think this chapter was great! --I cant help but love the parts where Rowland and Aelia go at it with one another--fighting. :)

I find it very amusing--especially since Rowland isnt even close to being talked to like that lol. Well I do hope you will write the next chapter asap...because I am dieing to read the next chapter already!

OH YEA! Did i mention how cute and how that kiss at the end was? Well it was!! Im so glad that he 'showed' that he did care about her safety. :) Thats just one step closer to them building a stronger relationship. :D

I LOVE IT!!!

Thank you for posting another chapter of this story!!! I was so excited to see this posted!!

I can't wait for the next chapter! Please let it be soooooon!!! I'm going to die if I dont read another soon, especially when its really getting good ;) To both parts. The two new love birds as well as the 'day' of rock climbing lol

i loved it, very well written. looking forward to more

Awww, Ive been watching every week to see if you've updated. But alas, still hanging on the edge waiting lol.

You've got me hooked with this story, thoroughly enjoying the story line thus far. As like the previous readers keep up the great work, and post another chapter real soon.

Please hurry and update. This is a fantastic and inventive story.

I just read this story all over again, and i cant wait for more! PLEASE post another chapter already!!

Its been months since you last posted anything.... PLEASE!!!

dont give up secrets so quickly