by Rollinbones
Absolutely awesome, I have to confess I took no notice of any grammar/spelling/punctuation etc I was too deep in the story, I’m loving this series, please continue and many thanks for writing! 5*
This is great. Unexpected at every turn. I can’t wait to see what’s next. Thanks
Well, you do have me hooked, but this chapter was kind of fragmented for me. Still good and better than most so it does get its five stars. Hopefully the next chapters will wind all these parts together and get Todd and Eris back together. I think they make a great team with a lot of possibilities between them. Thanks
Wow!
This story is just...
It's absolutely amazing.
Excellent work, I'm completely hooked!
I like it a lot. It was very imaginative an well written. I hope to see more of this story.
This is just incredible. The pictures that your words are painting seem so vivid. It is hard to explain but this story is so confusing and yet makes a strange kind of sense. I lack the wording to express what I feel aside from the fact that is impressive writing and that you have a real edge to your creativity. I love the story and I wish I could verbalize it. Thank you for posting it because it is a serious treat to find work like this.
J.D.