All Comments on 'AERIE: Book 01 Part 02'

by Rollinbones

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Gumby603Gumby603over 2 years ago
Loving it

Love this story and can't wait to see what happens.

PurplefizzPurplefizzover 2 years ago

Absolutely awesome, I have to confess I took no notice of any grammar/spelling/punctuation etc I was too deep in the story, I’m loving this series, please continue and many thanks for writing! 5*

ender2k2kender2k2kover 2 years ago

This is great. Unexpected at every turn. I can’t wait to see what’s next. Thanks

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 2 years ago

Well, you do have me hooked, but this chapter was kind of fragmented for me. Still good and better than most so it does get its five stars. Hopefully the next chapters will wind all these parts together and get Todd and Eris back together. I think they make a great team with a lot of possibilities between them. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow!

This story is just...

It's absolutely amazing.

Excellent work, I'm completely hooked!

technofrog2002technofrog2002over 2 years ago

I like it a lot. It was very imaginative an well written. I hope to see more of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is just incredible. The pictures that your words are painting seem so vivid. It is hard to explain but this story is so confusing and yet makes a strange kind of sense. I lack the wording to express what I feel aside from the fact that is impressive writing and that you have a real edge to your creativity. I love the story and I wish I could verbalize it. Thank you for posting it because it is a serious treat to find work like this.

J.D.

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Amateur word-smith. Proffesional procrastinator. Busy with a few on the go. Please be patient. I work full time and fiddle here when i get a few quiet moments to myself. Thankyou for enjoying my mutterings.