All Comments on 'Affair with an Older Man Ch. 03'

by elisa4334

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Good theme and fun sex. As soon as you get your tenses to work, your stories will be fantastic! One way to do that is to read them out loud before finishing.

Nice work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Reminds me of me

This story is great I hope you write more on it I'm in the same foot now except he's still half attached than I and he's 36 years my senior he does the same thing makes my all of my senses become muddled

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

ELISA is a KEEPER!

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