All Comments on 'Affairs Assistant Ch. 01'

Loved your writing, and the way things unraveled. Would have been more exciting if the old guy realized the girl misunderstood his ad.

Loved it though, will be waiting for the next one.

Can't wait for the next chapter

I found it a bit hard to fathom why she'd so readily agree to his requests, and why she'd lie about things like fucking strangers as her brother watched. I admire your commitment to getting quickly to the action, but a bit more hesitation/explanation would help make it a touch more believable. Make it a journey for your character to get from where they are to where they need to be for chapter two.

Please keep writing!

Please continue.

Was it mind control?

I picture her looking a bit like Sativa Verte. On the pale side, dark curly hair, soft curves...