All Comments on 'Afraid'

was good with good detail

Good story and its about damn time a writer on this site got it right about where the hymen is, 5* just for that, but really good job capturing a first time experience for both of them.

It's good to read a story so fully exploring the male POV

You captured the fumbling sweetness that is more typical of a realistic first time.

Another reader commented on the correct location of the hymen, but I don't know why -- your character had already lost her virginity, right?

Anyway, not your problem ... good job!

A great job and a realistic characterisation!

The key to a good first time story is to not try to do too much, making it totally unrealistic. You found the key.

I wish I could remember my first time like this, but I hardly remember my first time at all. This was a great short story. Thanks for sharing it

This was a marvelous description of a guy’s first time - I’d say it was the best male POV I’ve read anywhere