All Comments on 'African Girl Maid For English Rose Ch. 01'

While I'll be looking forward to more chapters of this story, your build up was quite sparse, and needed much more dialog. So many scenes could have used a great deal more detail, and the spanking scene alone just came and went. Still, your story was quite a turn on. It's not that you did anything wrong, just not enough right.

It would be really cool to read the same events from Victoria's perspective.