All Comments on 'After a Decade Apart Ch. 01'

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Anonymousalmost 9 years ago

Excellent base story line that could be expanded or continued very nicely!

This should continue to be an interesting read each step of the way depending on the length and by making an early judgement call on the writer's talent, good character depth with good erotic highlights and necessary environment fill-in to support us (sucked in readers) to return. Excellent!!

BRAVO!

Anonymousalmost 9 years ago

amazing

This is so hot and so amazing

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