All Comments on 'After All'

by Simon J.

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MeliawenMeliawenabout 19 years ago
Wow

What an absolutely lovely end to such a sexy story! :) Congrats.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Bravo

You portayed the feelings of a submisive very well in this, many people seem to not do that. The bond was well shown.

ZackeryFaelanZackeryFaelanalmost 11 years ago
Wow.

I feel kinda' dumb 'cause I cried when I read this. I think it's brilliant and the fact that you wrote them both so well is just amazing. I'm an emotional twit most days but this was really well written and very well rounded. Thank you for sharing this!

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