All Comments on 'After Careful Negotiations Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice

Great start! More please :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wow! A real story

Great start. You actually developed the characters, and set up some suspense. Not always seen here. Looking forward to the rest of the tale.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I'm intrested

Wow !! Got my cureousity, I'm getting wet reading ... I want morr

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