All Comments on 'After Children'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Interesting

This slightly weird story was a bit lost on me until I remembered that "disinterested" in English English does not mean the same as in American English (nor does it mean uninterested).In the former it means having no interest in an outcome as in unbiased .But the story in fact works just as well with either meaning so I guess 2 for 1.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Jeez!!

Here I thought i had been getting hot, uncontrolled, and lusty sex for years when I would stick my cock into my wife's cold rubbery disinterested cunt.

She reads a lot too, not unlike the wife in this tale.

Maybe she is preparing me for "night feedings" too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Original Plot

A different approach from the usual cuckold stories here.

Could have been longer and more developed though.

Maybe you plan another chapter?

eric shawn listoeric shawn listoover 19 years ago
Very interesting...

I started reading this with a kind of "what the fuck?" attitude but it grabbed me by the nd. Hope you continue with a followup. The possibilities are enormous.

esl

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
interesting

I liked this story, normally do not like wimp cuckold stories but liked this one. This story left me want to know what hubby now dose with the information he has about what she is doing to him......The real hoot would be him using thin info and starting to contol her and make her a cuckold her eating his cum from another women.... could make a fun story think about it

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Loving Wife ?

Need to finish this one . Is she a slut ? Is he a wimp? I think he is and not a good lover. Needs to find out who is doing his job, kick his butt and get revenge on her

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
nice story

I thoroughly enjoyed this story--really quite funny how she grew to control him and how his sexual response gradually evolved and caused him to move away from and change the boundaries of his previous sexuality and interests.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
more, please

The "ending" calls for an explanation.

Why is she hypnotizing him? Is she getting action elsewhere?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
with this discovery ????

jj please continue, with this discovery the husband should a chance to exploit a form of closure. Thanks for what we got so far.

bornagainbornagainalmost 17 years ago
A Big Surprise

A good story if he suspects she is going behind his back and fucking someone else he should get a lawyer and file for divorce .

freemic3040freemic3040over 15 years ago
Left me hanging

I like the premise of the story alot. A wife hypnotizing her husband and forcing him to eat his and someone else's cum is really hot, but then the story ended. I was starting to get aroused and then it was over. Would like a continuation, but for now was disappointed.

huedogghuedoggover 12 years ago
he discovered he is a WACC

As for the sorry assed anon who comment about my use of the WACC, get an account you asswipe

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
THE REALITY WILL RELATE

as to what turned her into a man-hater. TK U MLJ LV NV this story needs and epilog/sequel for some type of closure.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
#2 IF ONE CAN HYPNOTIZE OTHERS

they can surely do self-hypnosis. HMMMMMMMMM. DUH. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
thanks for the warning

but i dont hate the type of story, but I do hate those kinds of writers.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Huhhhh?

During the time he is plugging her daily while she is cold and dry and tight, she is obviously NOT 'cooking' a cream-pie for him. So where is she getting the filling now? Cannot believe she is getting up and going out. Almost as hard to believe the 'goo donor' is coming in after he is zonked out by pill or hypno! An 'afternoon delight' with a paramour, started after he has left the 'dead fish fuck' epoch, would mostly have drained away by late evening! Just does NOT hang together!!!

2*

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 11 years ago
Pretty Stupid

It might have been better if you continued the tale instead of leaving us hanging. Try again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
One of the silliest stories ever.

Well that has to be just plain the dumbest stories I've read on this site. He's going to respond to commands while he's asleep? Doesn't even make logical sense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Incomplete

Please finish this. 1

grabmyballsgrabmyballsabout 8 years ago
I Can't Evaluate This Yet

This could go a good way or a bad way. Please continue. It could be Great!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Another unfinished story...

... but perhaps it's a good thing it wasn't finished.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchover 5 years ago
Props for allowing comments and scoring

Story might go somewhere worthwhile. Problem ain't the manipulation, it's that it's not fun or erotic. Almost dry and clinical writing.

Thanks for sharing it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
whore

nothing but a whore and a queer wimp .as soon as you found out why not put a stop to it queer ,she fucking someone else ,and feeding you his cum stupid.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Mind control, although he's too simple to make it that difficult.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good mind control story. Very erotic. Would like more

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