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Anonymousover 9 years agoLittle Flat
The beginning of the story started off a little flat. Some editing would help, particularly in the use of punctuation. Nice, quick story concept though.
greygotskillsover 9 years agoAuthorRe-edited
Based on earlier suggestions by other Lit members I made a few changes to my stories including a few name changes. The re-edited editions should be approved shortly. The prequel to these stories are based on the re-writes.
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