All Comments on 'After Dinner Hint'

Good Story Not too long and believeable

Excellent! Just the right amount of buildup, the people seem real, and the action is believable, and you wrap the story up very nicely. The only thing I spotted is you used mom's when I think you meant moms.

Thank you for an enjoyable read..

Well, Davie, that's 'cause it is the most natural thing in the world. A boy and his mother are always aware that he came out of that wonderful hole between her legs, his mother's mommy-hole. That that's the cunt he lived in for nine months and the cunt he was born from, it's his own damn birth canal. Now David's sporting a big hard cock between his own legs, so nothing's more natural than that the boy should revisit his mother's baby-hole, snuggling his big cock up into the cunt that's peculiarly his. Mom wants her big strong David up where his "hard virile prick" belongs just as much as he does. To both of them his hard prick feels so comfy and cozy--so natural--jammed up his mother's cunt, surrounded by layers of warn wet loving mommy-twat, mom and David know that his prick is back up its natural home, his own mother's twat. Of course the boy fucks the shit out of his mother, giving her the best fuck of her life. Mom cums like crazy, her best cum is when David unloads his hot young balls and shoots a huge geyser of his warm creamy semen up inside his mom. It won't be the last time.

Cam he see through them? I didnt see where he took them off. And how about descriptions

Perhaps you missed this sentence?

"Just as I was certain that she had dressed the way she had so that when the moment she hoped for came, there would be no clumsy fumbling with underwear."

Obviously because she wasn't wearing any.

Descriptions of what?

Nicely done with a plausible scenario!

Hope this story continues, he gets his Mom pregnant, and her pregnancy causes her breasts to swell....!

hot sex, nice people, well written thanks

Thanks for your good work.

Tender, honest, sincere, a young man

learns about life as he fancies his mum and

they begin to really love each other.

A GREAT story! Thanks.

Loved it, very hot sexy story. I wonder if we will get to read about what happens next.

Great story, but simply not long enough. Too many possibilities left hanging. Another couple of chapters would have been perfect!

very hot.....more please........

hot!...

Nice story but you should have wrote more you should write more of this although it's been a while!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Your story is well written; however, I would have liked character developmen (breadth and depth). Your characters respect and love each other; however, they lack passion, emotional chemistry, and self-awareness and/or ego. Hopefully, you will develop this story into a series. If he impragnants his mother, how will be support her? Since she has not dated, how will sh explain her situation? The storyline/plots/subplots are present, please develop them.