All Comments on 'After Finals'

The initial flirtation is very hot. There's a natural development to the story, as the set up is executed very well. The sex scene is also well done, although its a little bit of overkill after a while, they don't have to perform every sexual act in one night.

I loved this story. The characters were likable and their personalities fit together well. And the guy was so charming .... :)

Not a particularly well written story, in my humble opinion.

I write stories also. Some better than others. I'm always amazed at the people who criticize and bitch about inanities. Your story was very good.

Great story...

One of the best I've ever read!

Wow! that was hot! i loved the way you developed your characters, his sweetness was definately a plus. great story, i really enjoyed it.

Great story....loved it....loved how nice and charming the man was....

Oh yes, your stories are hot,,, fire cracker hot for sure,,,,Kathleen,,, Guess who!!!!!

I rather enjoyed that entry. It was very erotic and seductive. Very much how I might imagine... um... you know. Thank you for sharing.

This is every girls erotic dream! I have read this story a few times I never tire of it! Thank you DallasJackson

Wow, this was fantastic! This had me squirming in my seat and swallowing hard the whole way through. Would love to run into Cameron sometime! ;)