All Comments on 'After Hours'

Got a 50 cause there were so many ways you could of gone from there with the story. Definitely shouldn't of ended, after all there is a lil' sister at the home where you have to make a phone call...

Pretty good, but the many typos detracted from the story line.

loved. it. hot hot hot. your stories are great.

This was not just good but fucking hot

The farting thing right in the beginning completely ruined the mood for me.