All Comments on 'After Me Ch. 01'

What a piece of junk, nothing erotic about this. He should go back to watching his morning cartoons.

I'd love to read more.

Great start, looking forward to more.

"I suppose I should avoid the temptation to begin by suggesting that I never intended for any of this to happen.

First, after these past four months with Bonnie, the mere thought of ever voicing as unoriginal an idea as that again makes me uneasy."

This was enough to stop me from continuing. It might be trite but its descriptive, original or not. It's not an idea. Your next paragraphs confirmed it. A waste.

TEASE!