All Comments on 'After Prom'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Very Hot!

Man that was a very hot story!

Gabriel OrrGabriel Orralmost 18 years ago
All the way up till...

It was a great story, up until the end. Though much of the story felt rushed, it seemed a nonissue as the flow of the story was nicely done, and the characters were easy to understand and follow. From the 'sitting on the stomach' part an on, though, felt extremely rushed and just didn't have that satisfactory 'climax' (no pun intended) these stories need. Nicely done otherwise, though!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
good story to jerk off to.

great story for jerking off which i certainly did while reading. good writing..keep it up. no pun intended there either. always like to read about juicy clits and pussy. love the taste. uummmmmmm good. thanks

richard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
poor car

I cant believe they keyed a lexus

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