All Comments on 'After School Session'

Straight into the sex scene with no character development, no set-up? Makes the whole thing a lot less interesting.

I'd agree with he first comment, but otherwise nice story. Maybe try including a little development first, build the anticipation before the sex scene.

I agree with the first two Comments. I also realize that this is a series, and redmption could be just a sequel away.

I like this story. Im not a real fan of one page stories that jump right into the sex with no back story but you could very easily build it up in other chapters if you choose. But it is still nice on its own.

It was a very nice read. I do hope you will continue it even though its been so long since it was posted. But I can see a really good story coming of this.

Keep up the good work. :-)

Really good use of details and interesting idea though I wish there was a little more of a back story.