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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
fucking hot

This story was awsome fix the typos and make then bffs instead of sisters and this story would be perfect

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
next part

i like this story and hope to see the next part soon.

ChequamegonChequamegonover 8 years ago
Liked your story

I enjoyed your story. But, you really need to do some proof reading. Nothing serious but a lot of small typos. Have someone do a read and mark them for you. Keep up the good work. Hope there's more.

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Let's just say that I have a lot of kinks & fetishes. Far too many to try and type in that little box above. See below for most of em, but by no means all of em. I have a vivid imagination and a high drive, if you know what I mean... Currently seeing an Editor... Kinks !No V...

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