All Comments on 'After the Fact Ch. 02'

This is gonna be so emotional!

Supernatural aside, this was phenomenal.

I agree with Marta on what she told Darren. With his behavior he is causing problems with his mother.

I hope we get the backstory as to how Lila and Marcus hooked up. I want to know why they had they type of relationship they had.

This is the first time I have read any of your stories and I must say your writing is wonderful. One of the other comments said emotional, and I must agree. But the thing is that all writers are trying to find the right words that make those emotions come to life for the reader. You are onto a great story, please continue this wonderful trip into their lives. Thank You