All Comments on 'After the Game'

by Taylor_b

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Brilliant

I loved it and can't wait for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
More - Quickly!

Excuses will not be tolerated. MORE. NOW!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Loved it!

I don't know if it needs a second installment (although that'd be delightful), but I'm definitely interested in more stories like it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
AFTER THE GAME

Taylor, What can I say! You must write some more. The best story I have read in many weeks. Please write some more chapters to this one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
great story

you have to continue this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Wow! Class fiction, and HOT!

Great characters I would lurve to fuck Janey! She is hot hot hot! Sarah is sooo cool. Taylor I hope you have something in mind for her. Does she get to fuck Janey? i hope so.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Seemed real

I hope it was. A lovely story. No cliches. And sooo sexy ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Seemed real to me too

I agree with previous comment. Best lesbian story I've read for ages. The characters were so alive I can't help but think it's based on a true story - I hope so too! In your Bio you say there's more to come, don't want to seem pushy but when?

I see this one's been up for a while, would love to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Just right

I'm not sure if I'm a lesbian, I keep thinking I might be but I'm scared. I've never been with a girl but I love lesbian sex stories and the best bit is how they come to it. You get it just right, a bit scared but no-one stops it happening. I would love to hear how Janey goes to the school and gets it on properly with Carmel. Please write some more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Good stories

Just got here via your bio after reading a perfectly smackable arse. Wow very different but both good. I loved the way you describe Sarah playing with Janey's tits in secret on the bus but the best bit was how Carmel agreed to the kiss, very sexy. Please write more lesbian stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wow!

Such a good story! Thought it was a bit slow to start with but boy did it warm up! How come I've never seen this before! Loved it. God I hope you write some more.

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