All Comments on 'After the Game Ch. 02'

just about the right balance... characters good, descriptions good and definately horny.. more please.... thank you

Two years and four months! Admittedly, I'm a pedantic old fool, but I struggle to get past the first few paragraphs of most stories, because they are so poorly written. Your stories are a breath of fresh air; apart from the occasional misused apostrophe, they are a pleasure to read. I'm rising 70; I hope I live long enough to read Chapter 3!............Aussie Frank

I constantly search for stories written with this kind of erotic quality. The dialog between the characters does it for me. I am a bi female turned on by stories about women who are into providing oral pleasure to straight women for the shear pleasure of it without any need to be pleasured in return. Sarah seems to be headed down that path with Janey and who knows who else (hope, hope, hope). I can not wait for your next chapter. Thank you for a very enjoyable story.

Ginny

Email: lginny34@yahoo.com

You've done it again though a bit short and very sweet xxx Had to go back and read your first After the Game again to satisfy myself. Oh more please!

Two years!! Too long!! Please write the next bit quickly. I want Janey to fuck Sarah then I want Janey to fuck me while Sarah plays with my tits

Beautifully done! You write so matter of factly and yet so sexy. I read your bio and you said about another story about a May Ball on the River Thames? Yes please! I would love to read more about Janey and sarah especialy if Sarah turns out to be an adorable slow burn lesbian.

I love your stories about lesbians. You write so truthfully that all young girls will know what you are saying.

So clever! what is this girl? she is like all of us at young... she wants to know to try. you write it perfectly

This and the first part are exceptionally well crafted pieces of writing and I am sure that a lot of work has gone into them. I found them very realistic and could easily identify with the characters which made them even more erotic.

I think Taylor_b has great writing talent and thank you to her for giving me such a pleasurable time.

(And looking at her bio, she is a very dishy lady.)

I came here following the link after your first story (Wow! That was HOT!) and liked this too. Not quite in the same league sex wise though really well written. So real though. I'm bicurious but have never done anything (too scared) and just wanted to be in that bed with Sarah. Oh I do hope you write some more though I see this was quite a while ago... are you still around? Do you still write? I may email you if I get up the nerve! If not, love from Emily