by rockycoveboy
...much enjoyed by this 75-year old reader. Thanks!
ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca
If you are going to have an illustrated story of any kind, let alone of an erotic nature, go ahead and illustrate it. In this 4 page story you had 2 pictures, both of the main character's boots and that's it...?!? That's like a good cook book with no photos of finished recipe results and only a vague drawing of a wooden spoon through out there entire volume. Illustrate your material (or don't). We've already made the choice to read this kind of literature so illustrations aren't going to shock us...
Nice story line by the way...
If you dropped the pics and placed this in either Mature or Group Sex... It would've been better. Still... 5 stars.
Wow, what a wonderful story, this is something I would love to see my wife doing. Nothing more sexy for me,
wow what a great story and so well and thoughtfully written. Lovely stuff, got my knicks off in no time reading this LOL
That is just my type of story! I hope the dirty old sods get their hands on her again soon, she obviously loves it so they should get a few more mates involved!
Well done.
This was a great story! Well written and extremely graphic. Just how I like them. ;) I really enjoyed it. You have to watch out for those dirty old men ;) β¦ or maybe you don't wanna :)
I like stories that are believable and Wendy coming from a small town, helping an older man with his lawn etc and not getting enough attention from her husband were very erotic stories. Continue with more with Wendy...Fantastic.
Wendy sounds like and looks like a very sexy woman!!! Keep the Wendy stories coming!
Here I am, a 70ish fellow just wishing there was a lovely Wendy near by. Maybe the garden story was a bit nicer. Not so many involved.
Superb. Developed slowly and erotically, the mark of a singularly talented author.
Your stories are incredible and I always cum really hard as I read them, Thank you so much and please keep on writing new stuff!