by jack_straw
But most of all, loving. The two have rebuilt their love into something quite strong, somthing wonderful.
Great story.
I enjoy your work and was pleased to find this new piece this morning. I loved the characters and most of all, a very happy ending.
Your name brings anticipation and expectation. This effort brought you home in more ways than one - it is sensed.
When one writes of something and someone close they can bring a certain passion to it - it is tangible - it is palpable.
Your growth is really appreciated. It breaths with life and its fragility.
Thanks Author
With Very High Regard
I went back and read the original when I saw this one. A fitting conclusion, Thanks Jack!
read the first one before I read this and the story is lovely. I am wondering though, if the first part is mostly true is the conclusion as well? If so I hope things with your wife's health are going well.
To answer your question, yes, like the previous one, this story is mostly true, except that we had our first coupling in our bedroom rather than the den. She's doing fine, and I'm doing great!
BTW, please continue to send prayers to the Gulf Coast. Even now, 16 months after Katrina, the recovery is going slow.
It's nice to actually see a loving wife in this genre. Sometimes we need a storm of one kind or another to wake us up and appreciate what we have.
Regards, Jack
It's easy for young women to feel nervous about remaining attractive to their husbands in the years to come. This wonderfully touching story gives young couples everywhere something to shoot for. Thank you.
of rebirth.wish my husband could see me,as this man finally saw his wife.amen to a husband who finally decided to be a man,allowing contentment into his world.peace.
This is only my fourth story by you that I've read and, even though your stories may be a little mundane, you more than make up for that fact with some of the hottest sex scenes that I've ever read, especially on this website. Everyone else's literally pale in comparison. Even though you downplay Darlene's looks, those sex scenes with her husband, Dan, of all people, have made her a goddess to any red-blooded male from 18 to 80. Who says you have to have a cheating slut to have a really good sex scene?
Yes TLW story. If the wives after her births period went vaginal plastic surgery the divorce rate could decreas some %.
I really don't see the purpose for this addition. Nothing new or different in their relationship. Frequently, stories in this category cry out for another chapter - this isn't one of them.
Bill
No story, but the love was luscious. This would have been a great ending fantasy if not for the inadequate first chapter.
"She must have been sitting on go some time before I got home."
When he cums, does she have to blow her nose? Sorry...couldn't be helped. Very well done. I tip my hat to you
Good but not Good Story? I get the impression that the story was a quick and lets just give the story an ending! Please your stories are Fantastic but not Part 2
Thanks for sharing this Good Story with us! ★ ★ ★ ★ ☆ WOOF!
Always nice to find an actual loving wife story. Cuck and slut feed. Hallelujah
i loved the story. Gave it 5 stars. Communication is so key in a marriage. Your story points this out beautifully. This couple reconnected before they drifted so far apart that reconciliation was impossible. Great job!!!
If only, we get old and things happen and sex isn't the same. Back in '99 I was 56, fell and had a herniated disc L5-S1, hurt like hell, couldn't sit or stand, leg, foot, groin going numb. Operated cured the still some things numb. Things not getting 'hard' anymore basically end of sex, pills didn't work and the drive wasn't there. Our lives went on we grew older and we enjoyed life together we got old the wife passed a couple years back. Pretty much end of story. I'm just reading and waiting and helping the kids when I can.
Great story I really liked this mini series it's more real than most of the fantasy that is written in LW. 5*
What a warm and heartfelt story. Well written with great emotion. Well Done 5/5
In addition to being in the wrong category, what We-The-Readers are faced with in this offering is a Romance story with NO drama! Chap1 was laden with tension, from throwing an alarm clock to Sweetie, and nearly hitting their teen daughter!
3*
After reading so many stories about unfaithful wives this is a great change of pace.
HEY, NITPIC !! Eat shit and die. If possible, this story is better than the first one. True love. I loved it. 7 stars, the Bear is a fan and this is what it is all about. Good story, bud. Thanks for writing. I'm sorry it took so long to find these two beauts. I do so love a happy ending.
The BEAR